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Rendezvous

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Rendezvous

[1114pm]
arrival.
her dainty feet slip out
of her four-inch heels.
she steps inside.
the sleek leather jacket
falls to the ground.

[1123pm]
greeting.
her sweet cherry-tinted lips
caress her lover's -
temperature rises as
arms, legs, bodies are
tangled within each other.

[1132pm]
pleasure.
two bodies mold into one;
two bodies satiate one another's desires,
bombastic explosions of the soul
sprout forth into a
state of euphoria.

[1204am]
completion.
delving into the abyss
of her lustrous eyes,
both know that
no exchange of words is necessary
to express the passion inside.

[0124am]
rest.
reposing alongside her,
breathing in her luscious scent,
fragrance with the ability to
take the air straight out of one's lungs.
eyes close, and replenished spirits
dance vividly throughout the night.

Aimée
080902
I finally attempted to make a more positively emotioned poem. After a whole day of working on it I think I'm satisfied with the results.

I feel that I didn't need to mention the woman's lover's gender because I felt that gender is really irrelevant in this case.

All of the times add up to the number 7. Lucky 7.

Enjoy. :) (Smile)
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serris-graphics's avatar
nice poem:) (Smile) basically how i tend to explain me thoughts at some points. or if i'm trynna say somethin just in lines that doens't neccerily hold the next one. ok i don't know what i'm talkin bout now :( (Sad)
but nice poem, good word choice and it flows easily :D (Big Grin)